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Statement of Purpose

Applied Program: Criminology & Deviance Control

 

I am a person who has a strong sense of justice. In my pre-university days, I witnessed and was outraged by the increasing number of criminal acts in China as the country experienced dramatic social and economic changes in the past two decades. But I was more frustrated with the failure of the law enforcing departments to prevent and crack down on criminal activities effectively. But as senior middle school students, my classmates and I could only criticize, in our heated discussions concerning some major criminal cases disclosed by the media, the deficiencies in the existing law-making process and the lack of effective guidance in the entire society in the field of crime prevention, which made it possible for some criminals to act unpunished. It is such an awareness that became my strongest motivation in enrolling in the People's Public Security University of China to major in security and crime-prevention at the Department of xxxx when I qualified myself during the fiercely competitive nationwide university entrance examinations. The moment I entered the university, I realized that my life would never be peaceful, for many questions that had been perplexing me would be worked out by myself, demanding my lifelong dedication. I also realized that the value of my life was to be embodied in my contributions to the maintenance of social order and the peaceful life of the general public.

 

As I started my undergraduate studies, I became fascinated by the systematic trainings that I received in the criminological theories and the relevant laws. Apart from achieving satisfactory results in my coursework, I did considerable amount of extracurricular readings that included Criminology co-authored by Freda Adler, Gerhard O.W. Mueller and Williams Laufer, and the Journal of Financial Crime published by London Henry Stewart Press. Through those readings, I developed some initial understanding of E-Commerce Security and Internet Casinos and Money Laundering, areas that characterize future criminological study but remain unexplored in China. These efforts helped lay a solid foundation for me to carry out higher-level research in the future. I also participated actively in seminars on and off campus. The regular weekly seminars held in my department witnessed my perceptive presentations. In particular, as representative of excellent students of our university, I attended the International Symposium on Preventive Criminology held in Beijing. My exchanges with the domestic and international elites in the field of preventive criminology significantly improved my theoretical level. This experience also made me alarmingly aware that my existing knowledge needs to be improved.

 

In studying every subject and every theory, I would maximize my initiative and creativity. I would not embrace uncritically any orthodox theory, but would attempt to arrive at its deeper implications. For instance, in learning the TAP (Time of Arrival of Police) Theory, I knew from my investigation that this theory has been widely applied in the criminal prevention practice of China's urban communities, which is symbolized by the establishment of the 110 Command Systems and the Street Patrol Systems by all the provincial and municipal public security bureaus, among which Beijing Municipal Public Security Bureau's 110 Alarm Reporting, Reception and Police Dispatch System serves as a model. However, after consulting many materials, I discovered that the security problems in Beijing are still serious. Then, why the TAP Theory that has been effectively practiced in other countries becomes problematic when applied in China? My teachers and classmates had heated discussions over this question and some even cast doubt about the validity of the theory. I conclusion was that their discussions were somehow removed from reality and inevitably suffered from some degree of partiality. To verify the TAP Theory, I made field trips to several patrol police stations and obtained my answers. The first is the poor coordination among different police units, resulting in chaotic dispatching of those units. The second is the unclear subordination of the patrol police, which led to ineffective application of TAP Theory. This process of making detailed first-hand investigations concerning apparently perplexing questions excited me, making me realize that criminology and jurisprudence, as two broad disciplines of social science, are inseparable from reality for their construction and development. Their theoretical problems can be solved only in practice.

 

This initial sense of achievement encouraged me greatly. I used my winter and summer vacations to undertake internships in the district procuratorate, municipal public security bureau, and various relevant organizations of security and crime-prevention. During my internship at the district procuratorate, my proposals to the procuratorate leader that the prevention of internal vocational crimes should specify the potential criminals and that unnecessary prevention costs should be reduced were adopted. At the grass-root police stations, my concept that the prevention of crimes should take precedence over the penalties of the crimes aroused general attention. My distinguished performance during the internships organized by my university won me the honor of Outstanding Individual of Social Practice.

 

As a subject of response strategy that indicates crime genesis, development, laws of change, and prevention, criminology should focus on the correct diagnosis of the etiology and social conditions of crimes to provide firm foundations for the effective prediction and prevention of crimes. However, the deeper I delve into my subject, the more I have discovered that the existing criminological theories in China are too emptily abstract and most preventive measures are not practically feasible on one hand and depend excessively on foreign sources on the other. To make matters worse, most domestic scholars tend to indulge themselves in theorizations and importation of foreign concepts, resulting in their gaps from the international level in terms of the practical applications of advanced criminological theories. In the field of economic crimes in which I am particularly interested, I believe that the prevailing theories of crime etiology such as Ecological Theory, Subculture Theory, and Theory of Imitation are all somewhat far-fetched when applied to economic crimes. The lack of effective etiological studies of crimes has led to the ineffective functioning of the theories of crime prevention and control. This accounts for the increase in recent years of economic crimes in China, the continuous occurrence of major criminal cases and their serious impact on the social and economic order of the country.

 

An earnest reflection on those factors has convinced me that, for pursuing a more advanced academic degree, my ideal choice would be the establish London School of Economics and Political Science which, with its most systematic criminological theories in the world, offers me the opportunity to major in Msc Crime, Deviance and Control. The lively yet rigorous style of teaching, the pluralistic and multi-perspective academic climate and the world-leading research strengths of your esteemed school will undoubtedly enable me to assimilate the most comprehensive knowledge of criminology in a competitive class. The professional knowledge and expertise that I acquire in your school will become the foundation for the ultimate fulfillment of my career objective in my home country: to work as a criminologist who can contribute to social stability, reduce the crime rates, enhance the level of social civilization.

 

Recommendation Letter

 

Dear Sir or Madam,

 

At the request of Mr. Muller Zhang, I am pleased to write this letter of recommendation in support of his application for admission to graduate study at your university. I am a senior professor specialized in the field of criminology for over 30 years, and have once pursued advanced studies in the University of Leicester in Great Britain. As the dean of the Department of Public Security at the University of Public Security, I have a close understanding of Mr. Zhang's academic capability.

 

It was at the period of freshmen's military training that Mr. Muller Zhang first drew my attention. For all the arduous and exhausting military training, he continued to self-study at his spare time after conscientiously completing all the assigned training tasks. What strongly impressed me and was generally acknowledged to all the other teachers in our department was his intense craving for knowledge, the extraordinary diligence and perseverance demonstrated all through his four-year college life in his studies, and his outstanding academic performance. When he was a junior, I delivered the course of Studies of Accident Prevention to him and his class, which gained me a better and an all-round understanding of him. Mr. Zhang has a powerful ability of self-study, which enabled him to grasp what I taught within a short time, and put forward his own viewpoints after he consulted and finished reading a vast literature written in English with good combination of domestic research findings. Thus, he has enlarged his scope of knowledge and improved his ability to analyze and solve practical problems to a greater extent. He could always come up with novel ideas which were greatly appreciated and highly commended. Mr. Zhang is exceedingly interested in criminology, spending most of his spare time studying the specialized books in the library. Moreover, his proficient English was of great help for him to self-study those books in the original related to his professional knowledge. His industry finally brought about a series of honors to him, consecutively receiving scholarships of first and second prizes. One point deserves merit is that Mr. Muller Zhang has exhibited an overwhelming ability of organization, marvelous leadership, a keen teamwork spirit and an excellent and harmonious relationship with people around him.

 

The idea of pursuing advanced studies abroad sprung up to him at his third academic year. He had discussed the matter with me to seek for my advice. As far as he is concerned, China's present research studies in the field of criminology still have some defects. Thus it is important and necessary that he pursue further studies abroad so as to broaden his horizon and enlarge his scope of knowledge. He is yearning for his pursuing his graduate studies in the specialty of crime, deviance and control at the London School of Economics and Political School (LSE). My full support of him, in a way, has helped him to confirm his decision and redouble his continuous efforts to make his dreams a reality. Mr. Zhang distinguished himself from his classmates in his English studies. His success in passing the CET-4 and CET-6 as a sophomore student didn't lessen his enthusiasm for English studies, instead he still kept at it each day. I think his good command of English in the four fundamental skills will greatly facilitate his studies in your university. Recently he has got a fairly high mark of 643 in the TOEFL examination, which cannot be separated from his industriousness.

 

I greatly encourage him to pursue his own dreams, and firmly believe that he is bound to achieve remarkable success and realize the true value of his life in his future academic studies and researches. I have full confidence in that he will surely acquit himself splendidly and make his own contributions in this field with his meticulous attitude in scientific studies and his persevering and enterprising spirit. Thus, I am enthusiastic to offer myself as his referee. Your favorable consideration of his application will be most appreciated. Should you have questions, please feel free to contact me.


Yours sincerely,

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