留学申请套磁葵花宝典


套辞SOS:接受转换校区

        申请人收到学校邮件说最初申请的校区没有位置了,但如果申请人愿意,可以给予其他校区的录取。因为这里,对方明确说明申请人身亲的校区已经没有更多位置,所有如果拒绝就意味着放弃被录取的机会,于是申请人为了争取被录取的机会,回信对方表示感谢,非常愿意接受学校其他校区的录取.


对方来函:

 

    对方发来问候,欲擒故纵,说申请人申请的C校区名额有限,不能录取申请人。

 

    随后立即又说该校还有一个W校区,那里还有空位。并介绍W校区距离白宫很近,暗示该校区也是不错的选择。

 

    对方开始推销W校区,表示两个校区该专业的课程设置、师资和就业服务都是一模一样的,并说那里是该系的金融政策研究中心所在地,鼓励申请人选择入学W校区。

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

我方回函:

 

    首先感谢对方就录取事宜来信,并感谢对方及时告知申请人申请的校区名额有限。对这一情况表示理解,随后清晰地表明自己愿意听从建议,转到另一校区。

 

    再次感谢对方并表明态度,并注明自己已经在网申系统中作出了回应。

Dear Cheng Ting,

 

Good day from the XXXX School of Business. Thank you for your interest in our MSB in Finance program at the C campus. Due to the large volume of competitive applications we have received for this program, we cannot offer you admission to the C campus because of limited space.

 

Fortunately, our MSB in Finance program is also offered at our W campus, located just 2 blocks from the White House.  At this time, we have a few seats available for the W campus and we would like to offer you admission to the MSB in Finance program at our W campus.  If you would like to be offered admission to the MSB in Finance Program at our W campus, please reply to this email by March 1.

 

The curriculum, faculty, and career services at both campuses are identical.  The W campus is also the home of our Center for Financial Policy.  I sincerely hope you choose to join us for the MSB in Finance program at our W.  I look forward to hearing from you.

 

Sincerely,
B
Associate Director, MBA/MS Admissions
XXX School of Business
University of XXXX


Dear B


Associate Director, MBA/MS Admissions
It is very nice to receive your message concerning my admission into the MSB in Finance program. It is also very nice and very kind of you to inform me that, due to the limited space at the C campus, it is necessary for me to transfer to W campus. This is very useful information and I can totally understand the situation. I would like to indicate, unequivocally, that I am willing to follow your advice and to be offered admission to the MSB in Finance Program at your W campus.

 

Thank you very much for the information and please let it be understood that I am willing to switch to W campus.

 

Yours

Cheng Ting

 


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