得知学校录取后，发信表示感谢，同时表示如有任何需要补充的材料，请学校及时告知自己。并另附上一份资金证明。

学校录取函：

        对方表示申请人已经被录取。

        对方强调今年申请者的质量很高，暗示申请人能胜出实属不易。

        对方表示期待申请人接受录取，并介绍了接受录取所需要的填写表格、提交订金等事宜。

        对方表示，一旦收到申请人确认申请的材料，就会开始着手为申请人准备签证事宜。

        再次表示祝贺，及期待申请人入学。

我方去函：

        表示得到录取非常高兴。说明自己已经提交了资金证明，如果对方有其他任何需要可以提出。

        为表诚意，表示为了以防万一，将已经发过的资金证明又发了一遍。

我方去函：

        报上姓名和申请号。说明自己已经收到了对方的录取，并正式表示接受录取，已经填好了准备入学的表格，也付了定金。并将表格和定金收据加在了附件中。

Dear Ms. Cheng Ting

Congratulations! I am pleased to inform you of our decision to admit you into the XXXX School of management MS Finance program for the Fall 20xx semester. You were selected from among a pool of vary talented and highly qualified applicants who are ready to come with a purpose and leave with the knowledge and skills to make their mark.

We look forward to confirming your admission to the class of 20xx. Please complete and return the enclosed Enrollment Confirmation and Intent to Register Forms along with a non-refundable US$450 tuition deposit payable to “XXX University” no later than February 14, 20xx. You may return these forms to XX XXX either by mail, fax or email as attachments to xxx@xxx.edu.

Once we have received our enrollment materials, you will be emailed instructions to guide you through the onboarding process in order to ensure that you have a smooth transition into the XXXX community.

On behalf of our students, faculty, and the administration, congratulations on your admission to the XXXX School. We look forward to having you join us in August.

Sincerely,
B
Director of Graduate Enrollment

DearB:

It is very exciting to learn that you are able to offer me a spot. I have already submitted my financial documents and if you finding anything missing or anything to be added please let me know. I would be most glad to do as you require.

In case that you have not received my financial documents, I hereby send them to you once more. Meanwhile, I will be looking forward to your final approval of my admission into your program.

Yours sincerely,
Cheng Ting

Dear Admissions Officer:

My name is Cheng Ting and my UID is xxxxx. I received your offer of acceptance into the MS Finance program some time ago and now I would like to indicate my acceptance of your offer of admission. I have filled in the Intent to Register Form and have also paid my tuition deposit. Attached please find the document MS Finance Enrollment Confirmation and Graduate Advance Tuition Deposit Payment Form and other related documents.

Please let me know if any further information is needed.

Yours sincerely;