Online Shopping
1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚；
2.网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题；
3.我的建议；
（范文2：一边倒写法, 对网上购物的优点一掠而过，集中论述其缺点并提出建议）
Online shopping is definitely a prevailing vogue of our times, especially among the fashion-conscious young people, among whom many are college students. It is often the case that students expect the arrival of their packages during the breaks of their classes, whose contents vary from books, fashion dresses and cosmetics. Much of their daily conversation at dormitories focuses on online shopping and their daily life has become inextricably connected with this vogue.
Admittedly, online shopping offers a wide range of conveniences, as compared with conventional shopping—cheaper prices, greater efficiency, and richer varieties, etc. However, its conveniences can become its traps. For innocent students, the sheer convenience of online shopping can allure them into what is called “impulse buy”—buying things which are not geared to one’s genuine needs. This will lead to huge wastes of money for students in their already limited budgets. Moreover, academic studies should be students’ top priority and, if students allow their online shopping to grow into a habit, their time and energy would be significantly diverted, and their failure to concentrate on their studies would produce serious consequences. Finally, when online shopping becomes a vogue among college students, it’s easy to generate conspicuous consumption, creating gaps among students who come from different social and economic backgrounds. To a large extent, those gaps would highlight the social inequalities in the real world and it is not healthy for college students, who are supposed to contribute to social equalities, to live in a world of inequalities.
Online shopping inevitably carries with it commercialism, consumerism, and materialism. College students should resort to online shopping only when their purchase needs are appropriate. In no way should they allow online shopping to dominate their college life. Otherwise, it would not only affect their studies but also deform their character.
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题目:
论网上购物
网上购物无疑是我们这个时代的一个主流时尚；尤其是在有着较强时尚意识的青年人中间，这一时尚不胫而走，而他们中的许多人都是大学生。一个经常出现的情况是，学生们即使在课间休息之际，也翘首以待着快递包裹的到来，包裹里的内容有图书、时装、化妆品，应有尽有，不一而足。他（她）们每天在寝室里聊天的内容，很大一部分与网上购物有关，而他（她）们的日常生活已经不可分割地与这一时尚连接在一起。
诚然，网上购物可提供非常广泛的一系列便利。较之于常规的购物形态，网上购物更为廉价，效率更高，产品更为丰富。但是，恰恰是它的种种便捷之处，可能会转而变成其陷阱所在。对于胸无城府的学生来说，网上购物的那种绝对便捷性，可能会诱导他们进行所谓的“冲动性购物”，学生会购买一大堆与其实际需求并不相符的商品。这对于荷包本来就不是很鼓的学生来说，会造成巨大的金钱浪费。此外，专心于学习应成为学生的第一要务， 但一旦学生允许其网购行为演变成一种习惯，他们的大量时间和精力就会被转移掉；而他们如果无法心不旁涉地致力于其学业，后果将会十分严重。最后，当网购在大学生中间流行开来成为一种风气的话，它就易于导致炫耀性消费，在来自不同社会背景与经济背景的学生之间制造一条条鸿沟。在很大程度上，这些鸿沟将凸显现实世界中的社会不平等。对于大学生们来说，他们本该去促进社会平等，但如果生活在一个充满了不平等的环境里，这肯定是不健康的。
网上购物不可避免地会伴随着带来商业主义、消费主义、以及物质主义。大学生们只有在具有恰当购买需求的时候，才应该去采用网上购物这一形式。他们万万不能让网上购物来主导其大学生活。否则，它将不仅影响其学业，更将扭曲其人格。 |
