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【六级全真题范文】Essay-1

Direction:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Way to Success by commenting on Abraham Lincoln's famous remark, "Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe." You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

Topic:

                                       
     
                                        The Way to Success


There are many ways that lead to success, such as an intelligent mind, a strong will or a passionate heart. For Abraham Lincoln, his way of success is to make full preparations. He would spend 2/3 of his time “sharpening his axe”, which is truly phenomenal.

Lincoln's famous remark embodies great wisdom, carrying at least two important implications. Success never comes to us accidentally, but as a result of continuous and patient planning and preparing. Having defined our goal, we must have a clear idea about the means to attain the goal. Without sufficient preparations, many of our efforts would be random and we would most probably end up in failure.

Another crucial implication is that, in order to succeed, we must keep “sharpening our axe”. Ours is a technology-dominated world and our social progress is inextricably connected with technological advances. It is perhaps because of Lincoln’s wisdom that the United States lays special emphasis on developing technologies and has become the world’s most technologically developed country.

Keeping Lincoln’s wisdom in mind, we should be well prepared in everything we do. Moreover, we should never stop where we are and keep searching for more effective means to reach our objectives.

六级作文写作要求:
林肯有名言曰:“倘若让我在六个小时内砍完一棵树的话,我会首先花上四个小时的时间来磨快我的斧头。”请评述林肯的上述名言,以“成功之道”为题,作文一篇,用时30分钟,字数不得少于150字,不得多于200字。

题目:


                                      成功之道


         导致成功的途径多种多样,不尽相同,可以是一个聪颖的大脑,一股坚毅的意志力,或一颗充满激情的心灵。对于亚伯拉罕·林肯而言,他的成功之道是做到有备无患。他愿意将全部时间中的三分之二,用来“磨快他的砍刀”,这着实让人感到非同寻常。

        林肯的至理名言包含着大智慧,我们至少可以从中引申出两大深深邃的含义。成功绝不会偶然发生,而只能源自持久而又耐心的规划与准备。因此,我们在界定了我们的目标之后,对于如何去采取具体的手段来达致我们的目标, 应该形成一个清晰的理念。没有充分的准备,我们的诸多努力就会显得任意和随机,而我们也极有可能以失败而告终。

        另一个至关重要的含义是,为了取得成功,我们必须持续不断地“锋利我们的斧头”。我们所处的世界,是一个日趋以技术为主导的世界,我们的每项社会进步,无不与技术进步存在着密不可分的联系。或许,正是由于林肯的这一智慧,美国作为一个国家格外地重视技术的发展,并因而成为世界上技术最为发达的国家。

        我们应该将林肯的智慧时刻铭记在心,无论做什么,都应该做到有备无患。此外,我们永远也不应该固步自封,原地踏步,而应该时时刻刻去探求更为有效的途径与手段,去实现我们的目标。





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