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                     文书写作案例(之四)

Describe in not more than 2,000 words, your reasons for applying for the course you wish to follow and explain how it will help you with the work you expect to do on your return to your home country. You should include an outline of your intended profession, your ambitions and your career plan. Describe also, your most outstanding non-academic achievement involving other people where you demonstrated leadership potential (you may describe an extra curricular / sport / community / professional activity or an assignment);

              Personal Statement

             (客户第一年申请时所用的Personal Statement版本)

Why Applying for the Course?

With the reform and open policy in China, the finance industry has developed enormously, and the insurance industry has grown rapidly as well. I am honoured to enter such a flourshing industry right after graduating.

All the courses I would like to choose are related to the insurance industry. The reasons are as follows: Firstly, I would like to learn more advanced knowledge. Since my major was accounting at university, I still need more systematic study in financing to improve my work performance.

Secondly, comparing with the developed countries, the academic study of the insurance and financing areas in China are at the starting phase. The market needs more talented person with international education and working experiences, but as many other countries, China is lacking of such kind of person, the problem is becoming worse since we entered the WTO. As the headstream in the industry, the UK has abounding resources and experiences for education.

Finally, the three universities I chose are famous, their courses, education structure, and teaching team are the best in financing. I believe it will bring me skills that are necessary in a constantly developing business environment. The courses put the theory into practice, which would create a challenging and stimulating study experience. They are just what I would like to learn about and what we lack of.

I believe the one year study would help me a lot in my career development. First of all, it will give me deep understanding about the insurance market in western country. Nowadays, we need an interantional horizon in our area. After that, the well-regarded and flexible postgraduate degree will definitely enhance my competitive advantage in this exciting and increasingly complexible industry. The last and the most important benefit is: it will help me a lot with my current career. One key function of Insurnce Association of China is to communicate and cooperate with international institutes, and my department is responsible for commuciting and cooperating with foreign educational institutes, so the study experince will help me to understand the academic and occupational education system in the UK and other western countries.I would like to help the industry of our own country to set up its own occupational training and qualification attestation system, I also hope that I can do something to strengthen the cooperation between the two countries, especially in the field of occupational training.

Potential Leader?

I am cofident that I will be a industry leader in the future, I am going to give you some examples why I am a potential leader.

When I was in the middle school, I began to demonstrate some potential leadership. I was the vise monitor in my class and in charge of the soccer team. During that time I organised many soccer games with orther classes. To be honest, I was not good at sport, but relying on my strategic and administrative capacity, and the cooperation among each team members, our team grew rapidly. When we finally won the championship in the third term, the spirit of our team was enhanced greatly. These activities also gave me some inspirations of communication and cooperation with other people, and from then on I was interested in management.

I am also keen on challenges. During my first year at my college, I planned a bicycle travelling from my college to my hometown, which covered 4 provinces and total of 1500 kilometers. This trip gave me an chance to understand what the real world is and gave me healthy body and stonger character.

Except from the vise president of the Student Union,I was the General Secretary of six other major student orgnizations in my college, which gave me many opportunities to show my leadership such as sport ,debate contest, student party and other colorful college student activities. Until now I still remember my team members who had helped me a lot and the rehearsal for my first student dancing party.

Plans for the Future

Working in this industry for 5 years, it gives me both the knowledge and a dream to become a successful Financier and Entrepreneur just like Wang Xianzhang who was the president of the IAC and the former president of the China Life Insurance Company.

Before 30-year-old: my main mission is to improve my academic ability, so if I am luck enough to accomplish this course, the next step would be the MBA, of course I have to get support from my employer.

At the age of 30-35, I hope there would be a breakthrough on my career. First of all, I hope I could get a higher position (assistant general secretary should be the ideal position) in IAC, which would enable me to be more influential, and be able to help with the industry development. Secondly, as one of the important finance industries, we desire a systematical vocational training system. In the past several years I have spent most of my time on it, I wish we can do more to make it perfect, especially the experience from the UK will definitely help us a lot.

Of course, as a young man, I am very lucky to be born in this exiting era which is full of opportunities, but I always know that the only way to make my dream come true is working step by step.

 

 

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